I have attach 3 files,

The one title article was my first write-up.

The one title instructor comments was the correction comments written on my article by my instructor.

The last one is what I am trying to correct base on my instructor comments.

Please I will need you to used the instructor comment to reshape and edit my write-up.

Please follow the instructor comment precisely and do a good job on it

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